Here are reaching fingers,
clutching brittle, dying remains.
Here are silvered arms,
rain sluiced and wind tossed.
Where skeletal shoulders
bare their shame and
bear the winter of Creation.
Here is the moss stroked body,
Here is the straight formed trunk,
Here is the inner downward thrust
To roots deep underground.
Where something unknown
wants to live.
This poem is unashamedly another “exercise” from John Fox (see last post), based on the format of a poem by David Wiley.
Same tree as last post too, another exploration of metaphor, and perhaps an expression of my mood at the moment.
Thank you 🙂
Thank you too!
I love how you can turn an ordinary tree into something so significant yet mysterious.
I love the way ordinary is extra ordinary when we look at it differently!
I love the way you two extraordinary ladies discuss trees, or should I say life.
And I love the way you discuss “beaches” of a different sort, or should I say life! The magical power of images….
Absolutely, it’s about seeing beyond the obvious I think and gratitude for small blessings. Sharing/receiving these moments with/from others adds another layer of appreciation to my life.
For me too.
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